For a first flash, it was really good. (compared to most people's first submissions, which are usually complete bullshit) The storyline though (whatever it was) should have been much clearer.
Just one other little thing, What exactly was it advertising? I know that this was the "edited version", but I can't think of anyway that could be used as an advert for anything, save prehaps some lame new action figure or kids cartoon/game. Methinks you may have become a little carried away. ;-)
To anyone who, can't get it to play - right click and check 'play'.
Although this is comleatly random, and had a crappy name (big mistake, as it will prevent ppl from watching it in the first place), The quality of animation was BRILLIANT!
You have really good animating skills, if you could put it into something with an actual plot (and preferably a play button that works) you would have a good cartoon!
Nice work, only you seem to have forgotten that most of the people on this site are American and they don't have chavs there (though they do have "gangstas" which are worse). Americans aren't going to get it and will probably think your a street racer or something.
You ought to put a note at the begining explaining what a chav is, or if not, a link to chavscum.co.uk. (If you don't put a note in the game you should at least put something in the author's comments)
1. Title: This is clearly a blatant rip off of the South Park movie. It is not funny.
2. Full-screen option: What is the point in this? It makes no difference whether you click on or off. And what do you mean by "if your computer have 500 mgh." what does MGH stand for? (did you mean MHz?) I will excuse your atrocious sentences on the basis that, on the basis of you name, I assume English is not your first language.
3. Intro: -"20th International" - what does that mean?
-"the best toon" - WRONG!
-SP Disclaimer - Like the title, this is copied from South Park.
It is NOT funny or clever to go coping jokes from TV or
Movies, especially since you had no celebrity impressions.
4. Mission status: How the hell can you not know where Africa is???!!!
It's that huge continent just below Europe, Moron!
5.Spelling and Sentences: As I said before, I will excuse your awful sentences because, based on your name, I assume English is not your first language. However if you were deliberately leaving out and miss-spelling words then understand that it does NOT look cool and only makes you look stupid.
As for the actual flash itself, it was just not interesting, the artwork was crap and CS has been done Sooooooo many times before! CS flashes are now boring. Next time, try to spell correctly, use proper sentences and don't copy jokes from other people. And most certainly DO NOT do Counter Strike!
I'm going to give you five because to be honest the animation was not all that great as in it seemed far too "robotic" if you see what I mean.
I think I may see what the real message of this is (assuming it is not really pro-Bush), are you showing how Bush is treating the "war on terror" as if it were the wild west, and thinking he can defeat terrorism simply with brute force.
And was the "that's no man, that's an angel" comment relating to christians (well, american ones anyway), and the way they seem to see Bush as some kind of, well... angel, who is acting in the name of God and will solve all of America's moral issues? ...or am I going to deep there?
PLEASE! PLEASE! reply and tell me if I am right! It seems no one can quite see what side you are on. Please set the record straight!
A good animation overall, Just a few little technical issues though.
1. why the archers? I do believe that Spartans very rarely used archers, if at all, they believed that archery was much less honerable than hoplite battle. plus the greeks of that time did not have a long tradition of archery that enabled them to have large numbers of skilled archers.
2. Change the monsters to look more well, "greek"
the beasts of greek mythology were mostly animal oriented, (e.g. hydra, chimera, cerberus etc...) while yours look far too much like some sort of modern zombie, especially with the modern spiked armour, which really ruins the greek theme.
In the next on I suggest making them more animal based, in other words just make them look more like animals and less like people.
3. This is addressed to "renagade51".
A) The spartans did have kings, however they were watched over by some sort of council to ensure that they did not stray from the Spartan ways. but were not the same sort of kings as later medieval ones.
B) How were Spartens not greek? Just because ancient greece was not one country as it is today doesn't mean the seperate city-states cannot be considered greek. what other name is there for that area other than greece.
anyway, rant over! & a good animation, keep it up!
Absolutly hilarious! I love weebls stuff! just good old british humor!
And to Himitsu_Katana, weelbs stuff is like the Anchor Spreadable ad's because he made them you dimwit!!! (its true, just check his site if you dont believe me)
Good Movie, & good use of the trace bitmap function. anyway it was sad, reminds me of when my cat was run over. might make a cartoon about him someday. keep up the good work!
SkyCube
All 16 flash Reviews
Rated 3 / 5 stars February 28, 2005
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For a first flash, it was really good. (compared to most people's first submissions, which are usually complete bullshit) The storyline though (whatever it was) should have been much clearer.
Just one other little thing, What exactly was it advertising? I know that this was the "edited version", but I can't think of anyway that could be used as an advert for anything, save prehaps some lame new action figure or kids cartoon/game. Methinks you may have become a little carried away. ;-)
LOL well it advertising a mobile phone company that dose music on your phone, the punchline was originally "WE LIKE MUSIC"
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars February 14, 2005
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Ok, it was a little too short and the artwork was kinda crappy. And what the hell does this have to do with the st. valentine's day massacre?
(plus, only one guy died, that is not a massacre.)
Duh, I know what a massacre is. Doesn't it feel good to have expectations of a massacre and be sadly let down?
Rated 4 / 5 stars February 5, 2005
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To anyone who, can't get it to play - right click and check 'play'.
Although this is comleatly random, and had a crappy name (big mistake, as it will prevent ppl from watching it in the first place), The quality of animation was BRILLIANT!
You have really good animating skills, if you could put it into something with an actual plot (and preferably a play button that works) you would have a good cartoon!
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars February 2, 2005
Nice work...
Nice work, only you seem to have forgotten that most of the people on this site are American and they don't have chavs there (though they do have "gangstas" which are worse). Americans aren't going to get it and will probably think your a street racer or something.
You ought to put a note at the begining explaining what a chav is, or if not, a link to chavscum.co.uk. (If you don't put a note in the game you should at least put something in the author's comments)
Anyway, good job :-)
Rated 0.5 / 5 stars November 23, 2004
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This was awful!
1. Title: This is clearly a blatant rip off of the South Park movie. It is not funny.
2. Full-screen option: What is the point in this? It makes no difference whether you click on or off. And what do you mean by "if your computer have 500 mgh." what does MGH stand for? (did you mean MHz?) I will excuse your atrocious sentences on the basis that, on the basis of you name, I assume English is not your first language.
3. Intro: -"20th International" - what does that mean?
-"the best toon" - WRONG!
-SP Disclaimer - Like the title, this is copied from South Park.
It is NOT funny or clever to go coping jokes from TV or
Movies, especially since you had no celebrity impressions.
4. Mission status: How the hell can you not know where Africa is???!!!
It's that huge continent just below Europe, Moron!
5.Spelling and Sentences: As I said before, I will excuse your awful sentences because, based on your name, I assume English is not your first language. However if you were deliberately leaving out and miss-spelling words then understand that it does NOT look cool and only makes you look stupid.
As for the actual flash itself, it was just not interesting, the artwork was crap and CS has been done Sooooooo many times before! CS flashes are now boring. Next time, try to spell correctly, use proper sentences and don't copy jokes from other people. And most certainly DO NOT do Counter Strike!
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars November 23, 2004
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I'm going to give you five because to be honest the animation was not all that great as in it seemed far too "robotic" if you see what I mean.
I think I may see what the real message of this is (assuming it is not really pro-Bush), are you showing how Bush is treating the "war on terror" as if it were the wild west, and thinking he can defeat terrorism simply with brute force.
And was the "that's no man, that's an angel" comment relating to christians (well, american ones anyway), and the way they seem to see Bush as some kind of, well... angel, who is acting in the name of God and will solve all of America's moral issues? ...or am I going to deep there?
PLEASE! PLEASE! reply and tell me if I am right! It seems no one can quite see what side you are on. Please set the record straight!
Good job SkyCube, you are right on track. I don't think Bush is treating terror that way, but several people do. Good job on the old man too.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars July 9, 2004
Good...
A good animation overall, Just a few little technical issues though.
1. why the archers? I do believe that Spartans very rarely used archers, if at all, they believed that archery was much less honerable than hoplite battle. plus the greeks of that time did not have a long tradition of archery that enabled them to have large numbers of skilled archers.
2. Change the monsters to look more well, "greek"
the beasts of greek mythology were mostly animal oriented, (e.g. hydra, chimera, cerberus etc...) while yours look far too much like some sort of modern zombie, especially with the modern spiked armour, which really ruins the greek theme.
In the next on I suggest making them more animal based, in other words just make them look more like animals and less like people.
3. This is addressed to "renagade51".
A) The spartans did have kings, however they were watched over by some sort of council to ensure that they did not stray from the Spartan ways. but were not the same sort of kings as later medieval ones.
B) How were Spartens not greek? Just because ancient greece was not one country as it is today doesn't mean the seperate city-states cannot be considered greek. what other name is there for that area other than greece.
anyway, rant over! & a good animation, keep it up!
Rated 5 / 5 stars June 7, 2004
Woo!
Absolutly hilarious! I love weebls stuff! just good old british humor!
And to Himitsu_Katana, weelbs stuff is like the Anchor Spreadable ad's because he made them you dimwit!!! (its true, just check his site if you dont believe me)
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 16, 2004
sad...
Good Movie, & good use of the trace bitmap function. anyway it was sad, reminds me of when my cat was run over. might make a cartoon about him someday. keep up the good work!
I will !
Thnx !
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars May 16, 2004
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It was ok, but you need to work on your "old movie" affects, the glitches need to flicker much faster & dont make the words so shakey.