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For a first flash, it was really good. (compared to most people's first submissions, which are usually complete bullshit) The storyline though (whatever it was) should have been much clearer.

Just one other little thing, What exactly was it advertising? I know that this was the "edited version", but I can't think of anyway that could be used as an advert for anything, save prehaps some lame new action figure or kids cartoon/game. Methinks you may have become a little carried away. ;-)

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Ok, it was a little too short and the artwork was kinda crappy. And what the hell does this have to do with the st. valentine's day massacre?

(plus, only one guy died, that is not a massacre.)

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To anyone who, can't get it to play - right click and check 'play'.

Although this is comleatly random, and had a crappy name (big mistake, as it will prevent ppl from watching it in the first place), The quality of animation was BRILLIANT!

You have really good animating skills, if you could put it into something with an actual plot (and preferably a play button that works) you would have a good cartoon!

Nice work...

Nice work, only you seem to have forgotten that most of the people on this site are American and they don't have chavs there (though they do have "gangstas" which are worse). Americans aren't going to get it and will probably think your a street racer or something.

You ought to put a note at the begining explaining what a chav is, or if not, a link to chavscum.co.uk. (If you don't put a note in the game you should at least put something in the author's comments)

Anyway, good job :-)

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Should have been a little longer but it was still good.
And to "castor t" win xp will run older games u just have to set them to run in compatability mode for whatever OS they were designed for.
if u dont know how to do this then go to the game's properties then the "compatibility" tab.

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If u want a BB gun then go buy one! (by bb gun I mean airsoft guns not proper air guns) they arn't that expensive and are much more acurate than a tube and rubber band, if ur not old enough to buy one then get someone to buy one for u:)